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These reviews are condensed versions of actual reviews I got about my beer commercial concept.

I haven't mentioned the actual concept yet, but it's basically about a guy who goes into an empty bar, orders a beer, and then two women come in and say "I want to have sex with you." Then they get into a big catfight. Like I said, Best. Commercial. Ever.

Anyway, here's what people said.

"Trashy. That's your concept in a heartbeat. Trashy." was the very first review I got. They went on a lot more, but I think the first three sentence fragments really summed up what they were trying to say.

The bowling shoes one was actually even more bizarre than it appears. Here's the actual review: Why the expclicit 'sex'? This concept could have been much more 'acceptable' for commercial use, if for instance, the beautiful girl had made a comment that was not so controversial...for a Sam Adams commercial that is...like..."I want to take you home with me..." or "Let me change my shoes...and then could we dance???" so, you just can't use SEX so blatently in such a commercial ad!!! (I don't think so...not in these shoes...close shot of the guy wearing colonial-buckle-type shoes!!!) Where's the humour??? Where's the relevance to the Beer!!!

Um, yeah.

The only positive comment I had was a guy (obviously) who wrote two girls wanting to have sex with me and fighting over me? WHERE IS THAT BAR!!!

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