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Sorry about all that. Here is where I think the storyline sort of bogs down. Not only was there a break that disrupted the story, but I really didn't get into the feel of this one. It started out really well, introduced Roy and Kaylee, but then, well... I dunno.

I think it's because they just escaped from a prison and there's no backgrounds during these few strips.

Oh, and I switched the ninja outfits from that stipled version to the mainly black color. Not only does it look cooler, but it's easier to draw.

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